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kingfishertom Date: Tuesday, 15-March-11, 18:23 | Message # 1
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Talon is like a mahhosive tiger coloured...tiger. He has extremely sharp talons and a tail with a poisonous tip. He and his race of creatures like to keep the remaining human primitives in captivity and usually hunt them for sport if they don't just lie about in the sun.

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Halfbrick Date: Tuesday, 15-March-11, 19:10 | Message # 2
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Okay... not really a story, though. sad

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smokeynova Date: Tuesday, 15-March-11, 20:01 | Message # 3
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more of a sentence

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kingfishertom Date: Tuesday, 15-March-11, 21:18 | Message # 4
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It's mainly the start of the back stories of each character

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Halfbrick Date: Tuesday, 15-March-11, 21:42 | Message # 5
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It's mainly one sentence!

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smokeynova Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 07:21 | Message # 6
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you got told!!!

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tedward00 Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 18:57 | Message # 7
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Yeah its one sentence. But very expandable. Be good if Mrs Provis let us do creative random writing in English. The death bunnies and primal rage could be EVERYWHERE

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SmithInc Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 19:14 | Message # 8
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Don't critisize his work, you wouldn't like it if I critisized yours, and if you do give critisizism at least at some positive points!!!!!!!!

You Friendly Neighbourhood SPIDER-MAN.

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smokeynova Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 21:30 | Message # 9
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it was very informative biggrin

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tedward00 Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 21:38 | Message # 10
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I did. I said that ready and good for expanding

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kingfishertom Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 21:43 | Message # 11
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To be honest, I couldn't be bothered to write anymore teehee haha

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smokeynova Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 21:44 | Message # 12
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OMG!!! you can't be bothered with anything anymore can you

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kingfishertom Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 22:01 | Message # 13
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Yeah, couldn't be bothered to feel good today tongue

I've cancelled this whole Primal Rage thing now. You can probably guess why


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Halfbrick Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 22:03 | Message # 14
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Lack of popularity?
And as for tedward00's creative writing suggestion, I'd pass up the Killer Bunnies part in favour of acid baths, compost machines and a little bit of ykw with sxyz


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kingfishertom Date: Wednesday, 16-March-11, 22:04 | Message # 15
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No, I can't be bothered to write it

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