Hogocaust survival (Susan)
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smokeynova |
Date: Saturday, 28-May-11, 11:12 | Message # 1 |
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I think it was around 5 'O' clock when we reached the alley ways. We each took a separate path, I took the middle one. It began to rain and the sound as it hit the floor made it harder to hear any signs of hogs. I looked at the walls either side of me, they were covered in scratches and blood. I thought about my family, often, I didn't feel sad anymore. It had been so long. I heard a noise behind me, and i instantly spun round and shot the incoming hog that bounded towards me. More were coming now, from in front and behind me. Two came from either side, and now I was trapped!
The alley was small but I could still kick. As one jumped in the air, so did I. I summoned all my strength and back flipped in the air, in mid-air I kicked out and the Hog went flying. The other Hog went underneath me and as I kicked the jumping hog, I shot numerous bullets into the other ones back and head. The were both dead. Thank God I used to do martial arts. A few hogs later and I found Jake. Somehow our alleys linked up. We soon found the exit and helped Charlie who was killing some hogs. We took them down and searched for a building to stay the night, we found an old Premier inn and decided to stay there. Today I have just been thinking to myself, this is definitely what every girl wants to do on there birthday.....
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Halfbrick |
Date: Saturday, 28-May-11, 19:57 | Message # 2 |
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Great... I haven't read any finer for a long time!
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silverfoxmedia |
Date: Sunday, 29-May-11, 08:53 | Message # 3 |
Good for you
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Nice. I like this. Perhaps use Present Participle a bit more, but AMAZING all the same.
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kingfishertom |
Date: Sunday, 29-May-11, 11:48 | Message # 4 |
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This is awesome. I like the fact they stayed at a Premier Inn!
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smokeynova |
Date: Sunday, 29-May-11, 20:22 | Message # 5 |
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Following in the footsteps of lenny Henry
FLAME ON!!! |
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kingfishertom |
Date: Sunday, 29-May-11, 20:23 | Message # 6 |
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"Everything's Premier, but the price"
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smokeynova |
Date: Sunday, 29-May-11, 20:33 | Message # 7 |
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Well in this case the price was DEATH
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Halfbrick |
Date: Wednesday, 11-July-12, 15:39 | Message # 8 |
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Cue dramatic music.
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