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Hamocaust survival (Charlie)
smokeynova Date: Sunday, 06-March-11, 09:30 | Message # 1
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reader, upon reading this then either the Hamocaust is over or I am dead.....

my name is Charlie, I am a solider from the military armed forces. but this soldier works alone. My family and friends are all dead, killed by those savage pigs. i'll take you back to day 1 where for me it all kicked off....

It was another fine morning ruined because of the pig clear up we were ordered to do. Everyday a different regiment was ordered to scoop up pig carcases, load them in a truck and drop them in the sea. Job would take hours having to clean the streets, we could never get them all up as they kept returning in the morning. One night we were ordered to stay late and try to find out how the pigs got back. As it hit around 10ish, we heard a noise and it sounded just like an....oink!!! we spun round to locate the noise, and there it was. A PIG. it was just a pig standing there, well actually it was a pig carcase standing there. one soldier dropped his hot chocolate in awe. the pig walked towards a soldier who knelt down beside it. he must have been insane to do that! then the pig looked at him, the man started to back away but the pig followed him. a fellow soldier said "Neil, he likes you" (of course at this point he seemed friendly). the pig growled and made us all jump, he then ripped apart Neil's stomach, intestines and guts everywhere. Neil was screaming and the pig devoured Neil completely. All of the other pigs on the street and in the truck awoke and we held our ground, good job we had our guns and shovels, we swatted the pigs away as the lept for us. I looked down towards the beach and soon realised we had made a big mistake......hundreds of pigs we had cleared up were charging towards us out from the ocean. "we've got company" I screamed!!! another man went down leaving me, Sam and Joe. Joe fled (we always thought he was a coward (I presume he is
dead now)). me and sam beat them all (barely), and we sat down to rest pigs dead everywhere (as usual). All of a sudden a pig burst from a bush and bit sam on the neck, he yelled out in the pain and i pulle out my ak-47 and blew its brains out. I looked at sam and said to him "I will avenge you sam"!!!

and that was day one for me, it was the worst day in my life. I will keep adding to my journal to give me someone to talk to, as im alone in this barn.

yours sincerely....Charlie


FLAME ON!!!

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tedward00 Date: Sunday, 06-March-11, 09:34 | Message # 2
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Very gruesome

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SmithInc Date: Sunday, 06-March-11, 11:04 | Message # 3
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I never knew pigs ate people in the Holocaust, Jewish people, surely the pigs would like them seeing as Jews don't eat pigs. Or is Charlie not Jewish.

Good, but gruesome... Looking forward to part 2


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smokeynova Date: Sunday, 06-March-11, 13:02 | Message # 4
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have you read part 1 and 2 coz then it makes more sense

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Halfbrick Date: Sunday, 06-March-11, 15:26 | Message # 5
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That's AWESOME! Wow! Well done, smokeynova.

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smokeynova Date: Sunday, 06-March-11, 17:39 | Message # 6
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thanks smile

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RampantMonkey Date: Sunday, 06-March-11, 18:00 | Message # 7
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Lookin' forward to Part Four
 
Joe Date: Monday, 07-March-11, 18:21 | Message # 8
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Good. A bit violent, though.
 
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