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The death of the ladybird part 8!!!!!!!!
tedward00 Date: Tuesday, 05-April-11, 20:33 | Message # 1
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Kingfisher the fox. The fox slyly walked in to the jet with a grin on his face.
"KINGFISHER!" shouted Tony. " How long has it been?"
"Too long Tony. You shouldn't of quit. We got jackets....."

"Where have you been Tony?" asked the fox.
"Well, now I live in this area."
"Oh yeah. I still hunt stupid WTF creatures. Its very fulfilling in the long term....."
"Really? I di........is there blood on the floor?"
"Yep. I may of taken a small hit." replied......Toelem.
"Toelem, show us the wound now!" screamed Rakkstar the hell bunny.

Toelem lifted up his shirt to reveal a massive gash. Blood poured out and drenched the floor, drowning it in the crimson liquid. The other 3 stared in astonishment and horror.
"You know guys..I..might just...take a quick.....nap.........." slurred Toelem. Toelem slowly shut his eyes and collapsed in a pool of his own angelic blood.
"no no NO!" shouted Kingfisher. "We must help him NOW. Most death bunny bites are ....(gulp)......fatal."

The 3 didn't even notice Manny and Beatrice climb back on board. They were too busy trying to resuscitate Toelem. They tried and tried and tried for 30 minutes but it was too late.
"NO...no." whimpered Beatrice.

The 5 decided that nothing more could be done. They stood for 5 minutes, standing over Toelems dead body.

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Halfbrick Date: Tuesday, 05-April-11, 21:31 | Message # 2
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Yay! The death of Toelem couldn't have come any sooner!
Like the part of Kingfisher, too.


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tedward00 Date: Wednesday, 06-April-11, 06:42 | Message # 3
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Was it gory enough for you yet, Wilson?
And I called him Kingfisher after Kingfishertom


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smokeynova Date: Wednesday, 06-April-11, 07:05 | Message # 4
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very very cool smile

FLAME ON!!!
 
kingfishertom Date: Wednesday, 06-April-11, 07:33 | Message # 5
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Cool, cool,cool biggrin

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Halfbrick Date: Wednesday, 06-April-11, 08:10 | Message # 6
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Not gory enough, no.

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tedward00 Date: Wednesday, 06-April-11, 21:19 | Message # 7
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OH COME ON!!!!

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Halfbrick Date: Wednesday, 06-April-11, 22:06 | Message # 8
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Maybe if you'd described the bone becoming visible as the blood poured out...

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